We completed a timed essay in class about the status of English Language. This essay involved different theorists that mentioned about different accents and dialects and some even mentioned about gender. I mentioned about my past primary research to do with my questionnaire that was completed a while a go showing peoples thoughts on the language we use and how language has changed. In order for me to improve for future essays I need to make sure I am going into detail with what I am writing and not just describing. I also need to learn theories better in order to be able to link them in essays. For the future I need to look at the mark scheme and make sure that I am adding more A01 to my essay because I seem to only focus of A02. In addition I need to add my own opinion on the points that I make throughout my essay as I don't really mention what I believe about certain theories or about peoples attitudes.
However there were positives to my essay. I did mention theorists and tried to link the ones that say similar things, also I used a lot of A02throughout which was good, it was better than past essays but there are still clear improvements to still be made.
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